Mutuality

Mutuality

A Poem by Poetic Injustice
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Codependency at it's best.

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Mutuality

There's nothing I want for me
That I don't want for you
There's nothing I want from you
That I'm not willing to give back
If my epitath read just one thing
Let it say, all my days ...
I shared all of me with you
And shared your burdens too

© 2008 Poetic Injustice


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Poetic Injustice
*tearful blink*

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This is beautiful. If only all couples thought and acted on this wisdom so graciously put. Thanks...I love it !!
Babsie Bee xx

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can't find the time to read all 60 or so of your posts so I skipped back to this one. You seem to be headed to be a poet laureate. This was short and sweet. Thanks for sharing the sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sweet. It's short and says a lot. In a loyal relationship this sentiment is what it's supposed to be all about....mutuality. The unequivocal sharing of all things which support and build one another up. Nicely done.

I like the last 4 lines:

"If my epitath read just one thing
Let it say, all my days ...
I shared all of me with you
And shared your burdens too"

Posted 15 Years Ago



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