Release

This is it, its the end. The song is over, and I cant hold on anymore. I am letting go of all the hurt and anger. I am putting aside my broken heart and stepping forward.

This is the end, i can feel it. My head gets lighter, my thoughts slower... and my heart slowly beats.

My blood runs down my arms like a raging river.... this is the end... and i am fading.... just let me be.... let me feel my release.... please, just leave.... don't try to fix me....

Reviews

[A]

I like this! I can see it being a song. The ending is sad though but it's still really good! Very well written and great poem! :)

[Megumi (L)]

Just let me cry ^^...

[fallen angel]

powerful

[JenLyn]

Love it, it's to the point, yet the words are powerful and well written. Keep up the good work :)