Lost Love

Laying in this empty bed, 

Thinking about the day that we first met. 

A single "hello" and I was blown away, 

didn't think it would feel this bad today. 

Yesterdays laughs might be worth all the tears, 

But you won't know because you are not here. 

We never got our sweet goodbye
It was more like "I hope you die". 

Reviews

[Riley Bray]

Wow, such a sorrowful poem, almost vengeful and a little bitter. Only a minor spelling issue, because I think you meant hello instead of hallo. Wonderful poem though!

[Dafina]

Thank you again!! Haha, it is spelled "hallo" in norwegian thats why, but thank you for letting me know!! :) Appreciate it!

[Riley Bray]

Ah, okay haha. Good job!