Irreplaceable

F you, 
she looks like me, does she kiss like me too? 

Do you run your fingers through her hair, 
just to embrace her, do you stop and stare? 

Do you tell her the things you told me? 
Like "without you I wouldn't be." 

Does she stay up all night thinking about you? 
Does she forgive the way I used to? 

Does she take your pain away, 
Is she really here to stay? 

Is everything always fine? 
Is she really worth your time? 

Reviews

[Just Kim]

like and enjoy your rhyme scheme and flow.

[Deep Meaning]

Absolutely fabulous. This poem reeks of saliva. This reminds me of my true poem "Pungent Lips". Please take the time to review it as I reviewed yours.

[Riley Bray]

Interesting poem, I liked it. My only critique, and it is small, is just that I believe its spelled Irreplaceable. Close though and good story. :)

[Dafina]

Thank you!! You are right, my norwgianess kicked in;)