The Ethereal Sky

I get cross when I write a review over a good few minutes and hit the button, only to find, I am not logged in! What happens to my text? Only the 'ether' with its dark secrets can tell you that.

I cannot make those digits fly within that dark, ethereal sky.
I try and try but fail, oh my
To make those digits fly and fly.
Oh my, oh my.

I sit and ponder ever long this puzzle set within
This writers' caff brings out my wrath, my text has gone--oh, sin.
This puzzle, ponder, set within.
Oh, sin. Oh, sin.

I cannot make those digits fly, my text has gone, oh sin.
What's this...a message on the screen,
"To comment please log-in"
I must, of course, log-in!

Author's Note

Why are we allowed to write the review and if we forget to log-in, the text disappears and we have to start all over again?

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

I think the 'ether' must be thoroughly polluted. You are certainly not the only one to have one's text disappear! I think your poem is really well written and gets across your feelings very well. I must read some more!

[Daffy]

Thank you for this review. It is nice to know that I am not alone in my frustration in dealing with the untamed and wild ethereal sky!

[Great Aunt Astri]

I call it the land of the sleeping bears! Best not to wake them 'cos you never know what they will throw back!

[Daffy]

ha! ha!, that's a good one. Cor, you should see what I have received when I woke them and disturbed their sleep!

[Samuel Dickens]

Oh my, oh my, befuddled, I, moan and sigh, wondering where those digits fly. You're not alone, Daphne. Nuts and bolts, I understand, but invisible electrons are a mystery.

[Daffy]

'befuddled', what a lovely word. Thanks for this review, Samuel.

[Ashley Armstrong]

I hate it when that happens. That has happened to me so many times.

[Daffy]

Thanks for your support on this, let's hope someone applies changes to prevent it happening.