I love you

Creepy High School Girl Poem....eh....

I stand to the side,

Constantly watching you.

I love you so much,

I just wish you knew.

 

I watch from afar,

I notice your every move.

I keep on thinking

That I’ll tell you soon.

 

I want you to know,

I want to tell you so bad,

That my life without you,

Is lonely and sad.

 

I don’t have the guts,

I don’t have the nerve.

I could never tell you,

Oh when will I learn.

 

You will never like me,

Never feel the way I do

So how could I ever tell you

That I love you?

Reviews

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wow i love this its good

[Kelly]

I like the way you were able to rhyme without pushing it onto the reader. Its a very personal entry about the writer and their feelings, which can be shared with many others. The line breaks are great and the positioning of the words are convencing.