Beautiful

Beautiful

A Poem by Billie Hanzen
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Very old song I just found on my computer.

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It's a beautiful day
the sun is shining and everything seems so good
and my dream has come true and alive
you are now mine and I will always be there for you
cause I know what you been going trough
i have a eternal love and that i declair to you

cause you are the only one i love
you are the only one i truly trust
you are everything to me
i'll love you in all eternity

It's a beautiful day
your eyes are shining and everything is so great
my heart is all yours
i love you and this love don't need to bath
i can never describe
how much i love you i don't know what to say

cause you are the only one i love
you are the only one i truly trust
you are everything to me
i'll love you in all eternity

it's a beautiful love
your face is smiling I'm glad you are mine
i only got one thing to say
i never felt like this and this song i don't need to sign
cause it just tells about me
i live for you in all eternity

cause you are the only one i love
you are the only one i truly trust
you are everything to me
i'll love you in all eternity

It's a beautiful truth
that only can be understand by me and you

© 2011 Billie Hanzen


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This was a great love song. Must say there was quite a few grammar errors, though. But that's all right, they didn't interfere with the message of the song. They actually made it kind of cute. Like it was coming from a little boy to a sweet little girl. :)

Good job 100/100

~ Iris ~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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this is very beautiful i was hooked

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice :P
I think it is super good :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was a really great song! You are good at song lyrics :)


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet song, great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was a great love song. Must say there was quite a few grammar errors, though. But that's all right, they didn't interfere with the message of the song. They actually made it kind of cute. Like it was coming from a little boy to a sweet little girl. :)

Good job 100/100

~ Iris ~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 20, 2011
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Billie Hanzen
Billie Hanzen

Odder, Denmark



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Hi. I'm 17 years old and live in Denmark. I've been writing music, poems and stories for several years now. I play guitar in the screamo/metal band LaVey, and I also sing and play guitar in the punk.. more..

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