SHUT UP!

A Poem by Billie Hanzen

this is an old song I wrote for my band LaVey.

SHUT UP!

Shut up and listen to me

I know what you wanna be

You can do anything whit your life

But only if you put down the knife

you told me god is gay

but then I have to say

he would be if he did exist

and then we would throw our fist

SHUT UP!

I know that you'll be hero

I'll be waiting

I know that you'll be hero

I'll be waiting

u can be what u wanna be

but it's hard for others to see

u told them before u can tell them again

u where never what they call a friend

don't sit and cut and cry

go out and make them fly

u can be what u wanna be

shut up and listen to me

SHUT UP!

I know that you'll be hero

I'll be waiting

I know that you'll be hero

I'll be waiting

I know that you'll be hero

I'll be waiting

I know that you'll be hero

I'll be waiting

SHUT UP!

you'll be immortal

and all maggots will bite the dust for you

you can't be slaughteret

cause you are immortal and you got better things to do

I know that you'll be hero

I'll be waiting

I know that you'll be hero

I'll be waiting

I know that you'll be hero

I'll be waiting

I know that you'll be hero

I'll be waiting

I'll be waiting (x7)

© 2011 Billie Hanzen

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cfix	This is amazing! I love this. Very well written. Posted 13 Years Ago This is amazing! I love this. Very well written. Rating /100

wirte4me

That was mad good. Great read. Keep going.

~Button :D

Posted 13 Years Ago

shedevil

crazy good, keep it up

Posted 13 Years Ago

FallenHeroXx

Nice.

I like it alot.

Fallen

Posted 13 Years Ago

Hello, Goodbye

at its conclusion SOAD was on my mind..

Posted 13 Years Ago

♥Kaitlyn♥

Really good... I like it
The only thing i didnt like was how you didnt spell out you and you just put "u"

Posted 13 Years Ago

Angie Diane♥&hea..

This was an interesting song. There was a lot of built up anger within it though. I could sense that's why you wrote it. Well I liked this a lot. Good job. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on January 25, 2011
Last Updated on January 25, 2011

Author

Billie Hanzen

Odder, Denmark

About

Hi. I'm 17 years old and live in Denmark. I've been writing music, poems and stories for several years now. I play guitar in the screamo/metal band LaVey, and I also sing and play guitar in the punk.. more..