I Love You, Goodbye

I Love You, Goodbye

A Story by Billie Hanzen
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A song I once wrote for my ex-girlfriend

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I love you, goodbye
this isn't just goodbye
this is knowing you'll be gone in a while
I hope you'll have fun
when you are all gone
I'll stay here alone, confused over this song
I love you, goodbye

You told me one thing
that did make me cry
you don't think we'll last, so is it just goodbye
but I'll fight for this
this war I will win
it's everything I want, it's all I bealive in

I love you, goodbye
this isn't just goodbye
this is knowing you'll be gone in a while
I hope you'll have fun
when you are all gone
I'll stay here alone, confused over this song
I love you, goodbye

and I'll remember
your voice and your kiss
there'll go a while before I get over this
it makes me sad
knowing that you're there
and I'm all alone sitting right here

I love you, goodbye
this isn't just goodbye
this is knowing you'll be gone in a while
I hope you'll have fun
when you are all gone
I'll stay here alone, confused over this song
I love you, goodbye

but something that keeps me up at night
is knowing you'll be mine alright
I love you more than the settling sun
I love you even that you're gone

I love you, goodbye / I'll see you in a while 

© 2010 Billie Hanzen


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I really like this. I like how much you loved her and how much it hurts you have to keep moving on with your life. You could love her but you can still continue into your life.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is very good. I kinda wanna hear what it sounds like with actual music.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, this is a wonderful write here.
I write songs myself. I enjoyed the flow of this one.

Posted 13 Years Ago


really good :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is actually really good :) but i didn't think that you, the person that hates emotional lyrics, would be able to write one :) good read thanks for sharing


A Fallen Hero

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww.. I love this!
It is super good! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Billie Hanzen
Billie Hanzen

Odder, Denmark



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Hi. I'm 17 years old and live in Denmark. I've been writing music, poems and stories for several years now. I play guitar in the screamo/metal band LaVey, and I also sing and play guitar in the punk.. more..

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