Safe Way

Safe Way

A Poem by Derek Thiem
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A poem about the joys of working as a checker.

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Safe Way


I put on my tie

and sigh

then smile

hide behind an apron

and make polite conversation


How are you?

I’m good!

and you?

I’m good!

That’s good.

We’re good.

And should I say well instead?

The English teacher locked inside my head

debates the ethics of improper usage

versus the role of social registers

while my body moves in meditative rhythm


grab, pull, scan,

beep.

grab, pull, scan,

beep.


my hands move quick

but my mind’s asleep

I

grab, pull, scan,

beep.

grab, pull, scan,

beep.


together we make the sounds

of a life support machine.


I need a manager’s override

on checkstand 3

and a price check

on what my decisions have cost me.

© 2017 Derek Thiem


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Very clever poem. Insightful and self-analytical. Some life choices imprison us, or merely put us to sleep- or on "life support". Excellent!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Derek Thiem

7 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed and related to it somehow. Always good when a reader can connect to something you w.. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

7 Years Ago

Absolutely right! Love your work.

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Added on May 21, 2017
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