Just for you

Roses are red, sky is blue
There is no one, who can replace you.
All through the day, I ought to see
But the day pass in dispair and I could only plee.

Waiting...waiting...my whole day passes as such
The call from the end relaxes much.
And the time flies so fast with its wings
Leaving me happy and my heart on swings.

All through the dark hours, I travel beyond horizon
And the night ends with the brightening sun.
With the first ray of burning ball, new hopes arise
And again from dusk to dawn, same butterflies.

Don't know if the life would lead to a better turn
Could only hope and pray for it with firm.
Past proves that the true one wins,
But future will tell if the past did not grin.

By the time let (us) be happy and loving
For who knows what will be happening.
Will try my best to be at your end
With the hope that you will not suspend…….

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Sweet romantic write. Lydi**

[Srishti Agrawal]

Thnk you 😊😊

[Mimisha]

Amazing poetry. Well done sris I just loved it. :)

[Srishti Agrawal]

Thnk u Mimisha😊😋

[Akash]

Nice one to start with, some common words can be replaced with productive synonyms.
Imagination wise...quite efficacious

[Srishti Agrawal]

Tysm brothr....
Will definitely keep ur points in mind for d nxt one..😊

[andrew mitchell]

you dont submit work akash. i wonder why

[AjinKya Kamle]

Lines with beautiful meaning!! Keep it up 😊

[Srishti Agrawal]

Ty Ajinkya...😃

[Veena Pandey]

Superb girl!!
Keep writing. :)

[Srishti Agrawal]

Thnk u Veena😊😆

[Rashi Sikarwar]

Excellent work .....Really good job😃

[Srishti Agrawal]

Ty rashi😘😊

[vandana]

Beautiful lines ! and expressed in very amazing way ...Wonderful work dear

[Srishti Agrawal]

Thnks Vandana😊

[Shubham Agarwal]

Just believe in yourself bcz we will always be with you......

Nice one there

[Srishti Agrawal]

Tysm brother😆😊

[Poornendu Pandey]

That was Beautifully expressed. Well from now I see a writer in you. :)

[Srishti Agrawal]

Tysm brothr...😊😊

[Yashi]

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious... well done cutie pie 🤗

[Srishti Agrawal]

Awww....soo sweet of u di😍😍😘😘😘