Just for you

Roses are red, sky is blue
There is no one, who can replace you.
All through the day, I ought to see
But the day pass in dispair and I could only plee.

Waiting...waiting...my whole day passes as such
The call from the end relaxes much.
And the time flies so fast with its wings
Leaving me happy and my heart on swings.

All through the dark hours, I travel beyond horizon
And the night ends with the brightening sun.
With the first ray of burning ball, new hopes arise
And again from dusk to dawn, same butterflies.

Don't know if the life would lead to a better turn
Could only hope and pray for it with firm.
Past proves that the true one wins,
But future will tell if the past did not grin.

By the time let (us) be happy and loving
For who knows what will be happening.
Will try my best to be at your end
With the hope that you will not suspend…….

Reviews

[Rachit Agrawal]

nice one topper..keep going buddy :D

[Srishti Agrawal]

Thnk u toppr...😂😂😊
M toppr...😂😂😂😂

[Tony Jordan]

Superb write but could use quite a bit of editing
Hth
:)

[Srishti Agrawal]

Thnk u....

[Harit atul]

A great combination of words to create a awesome poem.. ....

[Srishti Agrawal]

Thnk u Harit😃😊

[Shailza Dubey]

Great work sris! Keep it up👍

[Srishti Agrawal]

Tysm dear😄😊

[sanchit]

very proud of u sis..
a wonderful poem loved it...

[Srishti Agrawal]

Thnk u brothr....

[Aditya Agrawal]

Awesome.. Gr8 work sis...

[Srishti Agrawal]

Thnk u brother..😊😋

[Dk]

NYC poem sris..... we are really proud of you dear...keep writing

[Srishti Agrawal]

Thnks a lot Dk...😊

[akansha tiwari]

So here is a critical appreciation for ur wrk..relevant use of literary devices;nice imagination and overall a good start,,waiting for ur next one dear :-)

[Srishti Agrawal]

Tysm akansha....
Will post d nxt 1 soon...😊😋