Fake or Awake?

Fake or Awake?

A Poem by DREALM
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I no longer fear the unknown.

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I want to dream forever to wake up, never. I hope death is an everlasting dream. I won’t know till I go, awaiting the brightest light beam. I cry every time I awake, I rather die to live in a world that’s fake. It’s just as real as I want it to be; at least there I am free. There I can die, I can cry, I can lie and it doesn’t matter. Here to do either one will make me or someone else sadder. Some dreams are nightmares but replace it with another. Good, bad, good, bad, it does not matter (there) Brother. Maybe I’m dreaming right now and death is that wonderful gift, if I knew it was true. I would Evacuate Soul so easy and swift. Stuck here because of the unknown, I’m only here till (their) cover is blown. With all this knowledge an answer will be shown. I hate waking up, it’s the dreams I miss. I’m ready to jump in the abyss, stuck here because of my purpose.

 

© copyright 2008

© 2008 DREALM


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WOW! That was very deep and spoke alot about the world today and how many of us view it. You have spoken more than then just the truth. That is true about not wanting to live in a fake world and that we all have a purpose in it. Most of us pry for death but are scared of the out come. Most just think that are suffering in this life is for a purpose and we silently in are pain wait to know the answer or just wait for the suffering to end. I feel that most of us want the answers after gaining knowledge of many things that we all have wondered. Sometimes the we dont want to belive the answer to the question we have so worked hard to learn. Sometimes the answer that you have seeked adds to the suffering. You do have point though. soem of us are waiting for the aybss to come so that are suffering ends. I enjoyed your writting and going to read more of yourr work in the future-Dark Wolf

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow!! Hun that is deep. I know I've felt like that too. It's good it really is.


xoxo Jenn

Posted 16 Years Ago


ohhh nice rhyming sceme.... good theme... who doesnt want to see whats beyond this life sometimes... everyone wonders.... creative and savy.... swwwwwwwet write

Posted 16 Years Ago


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DREALM
DREALM

Santa Rosa, CA



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