Don't Leave

this is a poem i wrote to try to tell my fiance how much I love her.

Don't leave me, what about the laughs?

 

Dont leave me, what about all the happy times?

 

You say you need a break,

 

but to tell the truth, my heart is at stake.

 

If you leave me I lose myself,

 

you've helped me all this time.

 

All I need is some more help.

 

Please don't leave, I can't take the pain.

 

I gave my heart what more can I give?

 

I trust you with everything,

 

but you can barely trust me.

 

You say theres trust issues,

 

I just want to help.

 

You say you trust me,

 

but yet you dont.

 

If you trust me, let me help.

 

Please don't leave me,

 

I will try to give more.

 

please dont leave,

 

I love you so much.

 

 

Reviews

[Flame DM]

your fiance is a very lucky woman to have a guy write such a wonderful poem to her

[Kiddx]

You say you trust me,
but yet you dont.
If you trust me, let me help

Oh! How i know these words and feelings all to well, this is a sincere and heartfelt caring write to make someone forgive and full of unselfishness, cause you are willing too, this is a wonderful write.

[Susan]

I'm not going to leave you david.... I want you to love me and i cant wait till you come this Summer!


I love you,
Susan