Change isn't always for the best

I sit here and wait for you to change
for you to love like I do you
When will that day come?
I wait
and wait
and wait.
You tell me things have changed
that you're better now
most of all oyu tell me you've changed
But I cant see it
I can't see the real you
The one I loved
The one I ONCE Loved long ago
But now it's over
Your gone in the distance
Over a bridge and away from me.
Away from the past
Away from our past....
-Destyni P♥

Author's Note

This is only one of my first and I would like some advice

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

well, I feel slightly old, cause I know this would be deeper of if i shaved off 15 or 17 yrs. But nice flow, nice bit of romantic ideals, but for the young.

[Teenage Romeo]

its good i think alot of people can realate to this.its teenage love at its worse but its so true i like this alot

[Skye]

I liked it, and the tital is so so so true. my favorite lines were
'The one I loved
the one I ONCE loved long ago'

[Destyni Pitney]

It has black stuff on it because i copied it from my blog. Check it out http://dpitney.blogspot.com/