What Happened?

What Happened?

A Poem by Sarah Jane

Last night you held me
We laughed and you kissed me
Tonight you face the wall
Without a word
Last night you whispered sweetly
Rocked me gently, firmly
Tonight you didn't bother
To even notice my effort
Last night you were a dream
Something truly unreal
Tonight I cannot sleep
Hoping I'll soon wake up
Tonight you're not yourself
And frankly, I want you back

© 2013 Sarah Jane


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we're a strange lot arent we..

sometimes people just need a little space.. their not used to being so close to someone that much..

step away for awhile.. and watch them dying to have you back..

nice one here Sarah.. this is a piece we all go through.. on both sides of that coin

good one!

:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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This is nicely written. I find it sad and also hopeful. It shows strength.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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