In its Grip!

In its Grip!

A Poem by Dylan Macadham
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It's Disquietude,
this feeling of foreboding
that grips us these days.
.  .  .
An Anxiety
coming from beyond ourselves,
encompassing us.
.  .  .
A strange Loss of faith
in Norms we've take for granted,
now slipping away.
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In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

© 2025 Dylan Macadham


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Woah, such strong feelings for anxiety and well explained. I felt this! I was happy before I read that poem, you made me anxious!
Also cause English is not my native language I had to look up the dictionary, I've learned some great words!

Thank you for sharing!


Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

3 Days Ago

Thanks, and sorry I made you anxious :)
(I had to look up 'Disquietude' too)
Beren

3 Days Ago

Hahaha, this made me feel a lot better. Thank you. Great Poem.



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anxiety and a sense of uneasiness grips us all. you brings this out and hammer the point here, you always pack a punch with the words, Dylan.

Posted 1 Day Ago


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MCS
Always enjoy your posts. You hit hard and often; love it.

Posted 3 Days Ago


What a poem ! Powerful ,interesting work

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

3 Days Ago

Thanks Dadisha :)
Powerful and poignant. Great work.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

3 Days Ago

Appreciated Thomas :)
A trio of senryu. Powerfully delivered and sum up well the current political climate. Foreboding is an excellent description of how I am now viewing the world, along with many. I sincerely hope it is a temporary feeling. Well done Dylan. All the best.

Chris

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

3 Days Ago

Thanks Chris, much appreciated!
My Mother's favorite expression for hard-patches was, "This .. read more
I know the feeling. The norms I have lived by in my near eighty years are all up for grabs. Of course, the powers that were are not the powers that be. I hope these current ones will soon pass. ASAP.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

3 Days Ago

I hope so too JB, but Trump'sBunch is talking a 3rd term. (Damn, how long can a guy who lives on jun.. read more
Woah, such strong feelings for anxiety and well explained. I felt this! I was happy before I read that poem, you made me anxious!
Also cause English is not my native language I had to look up the dictionary, I've learned some great words!

Thank you for sharing!


Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

3 Days Ago

Thanks, and sorry I made you anxious :)
(I had to look up 'Disquietude' too)
Beren

3 Days Ago

Hahaha, this made me feel a lot better. Thank you. Great Poem.

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Added on March 29, 2025
Last Updated on March 29, 2025

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Dylan Macadham
Dylan Macadham

Seattle, WA



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