Force Yourself!

Force Yourself!

A Poem by Dylan Macadham
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Are you feeling down?
Like, really down in the dumps?
Like you've hit bottom?
.  .  .
Okay, Ask yourself,
"What did I do last time
to get myself up?"
.  .  .
If that doesn't work
force yourself to take a walk.
Always a good start.
________

In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

© 2025 Dylan Macadham


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I like this piece. I like walking, everyday I walk for atleast an hour and I love it. so true, get moving, do some activity, free up your mind and get back up. I like the message here, so positive and uplifting. thanks for this write, Dylan. enjoyed reading it.

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Dylan Macadham

1 Week Ago

Thanks AH! I'm a Mile-a-Day walker, sounds like you're Two :)



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I like this piece. I like walking, everyday I walk for atleast an hour and I love it. so true, get moving, do some activity, free up your mind and get back up. I like the message here, so positive and uplifting. thanks for this write, Dylan. enjoyed reading it.

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Dylan Macadham

1 Week Ago

Thanks AH! I'm a Mile-a-Day walker, sounds like you're Two :)
How I can relate!!! I just came back from a lovely walk, on the grounds of an institute with large trees starting to bud, paths to peek at some cows and aim to let my brain go free and get some exercise my body too...great idea when you're a bit down!
Warmly, B

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Dylan Macadham

1 Week Ago

Thanks Betty, sounds like a wonderful walk! :)
Betty Hermelee

1 Week Ago

my pleasure always🌷
Warmly
B
I’ll take this as a sign and take a walk, I know I needed this. Thanks sir

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Dylan Macadham

1 Week Ago

Thanks, Beren! Such a nice review :)
Enjoy you walk. Travel, even a walk around the block, br.. read more
Thanks Dylan this really helped. I was down some mintues ago (No kidding)

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Dylan Macadham

1 Week Ago

Hi Martiya, Thanks! Such a feel-good review! :)

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Added on March 17, 2025
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Dylan Macadham
Dylan Macadham

Seattle, WA



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