A Question in time ..?

A Question in time ..?

A Poem by Dylan Macadham
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Waiting for something 
to happen is like waiting 
for life to begin.
.  .  .
But on the Brightside 
times slows, it all but stands still,
waiting has no end.
.  .  .
So, what will it be?
A Happy Time? A Long Time?
Or Let's Wait and See?
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In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

...Was planning to discuss Einstein's Theory of Relativity 
but I've run out of space & time :)
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© 2025 Dylan Macadham


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lol I once wrote a poem about time about waiting for my laundry to dry at a laundromat and how it slows down I hypothesized that the secret to longevity is to be constantly waiting for your clothes to dry the only bad part of this eureka realization is that you would have to spend eternity waiting for your laundry:/

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Dylan Macadham

1 Day Ago

Thanks Robert. Love the laundry bit :) ...no clean clothes and nowhere to go, haha :)



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this is like a time capsule unfolding...
a poem about time? that's a question in time, literally. I like the way you tie time with waiting here, time waits for none. and your note on Einstein's theory of relativity, that's really apt.. i like the way you play with with words here. great going, keep 'em coming, Dylan.

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lol I once wrote a poem about time about waiting for my laundry to dry at a laundromat and how it slows down I hypothesized that the secret to longevity is to be constantly waiting for your clothes to dry the only bad part of this eureka realization is that you would have to spend eternity waiting for your laundry:/

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

1 Day Ago

Thanks Robert. Love the laundry bit :) ...no clean clothes and nowhere to go, haha :)
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OMG I just had a flashback to grade 10 English reading Waiting for Godot.

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Dylan Macadham

1 Day Ago

Lie down, take an aspirin, and review me in the morning🤣

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Added on February 21, 2025
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Seattle, WA



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