Misplay!

Misplay!

A Poem by Dylan Macadham
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Errors are misplays
with time remaining to aim.
Take care, it's your game.
.  .  .
In life and in sport,
to the one with least misplay
go points, match and day.
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In traditional Senryu/Haiku format 

"To err is human ..."-Alexander Pope

© 2025 Dylan Macadham


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In life, we don't always win,even though we try very hard to succeed....losing is learning a lesson, and taking it with grace...it might even make one try harder next time...I know may people who have fought to win...yet they take their losses and move on....a good comment!
Warmly, B













Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

21 Hours Ago

Thanks Betty, and yes, you're right of course - losses, failures can often teach us more than succes.. read more
Betty Hermelee

7 Hours Ago

you are Very Welcome Dylan
Warmly, B🌷🌷🌷



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with failures, comes learning.. and may lead to to success later, if lessons are applied well. it's a cycle I guess, to err, learn and succeed, like rinse, repeat. life and sport are similar in a way, there's a winner and a loser, we could have a tie too where we go nowhere and are stuck. thought provoking write, enjoyed reading it. thanks Dylan.

Posted 14 Hours Ago


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Dylan Macadham

10 Hours Ago

Yes, for sure, failures are opportunities for learning!
Thanks for your thoughts, AH :)
Live and learn. Terrific write.

Posted 18 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

17 Hours Ago

Thanks Thomas :)
Seems that losing is a route to - accepting an ending
that's meant to finish - most of the time! :)

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

21 Hours Ago

Thanks Emmajoy, and for the clever way you put it!:)
In life, we don't always win,even though we try very hard to succeed....losing is learning a lesson, and taking it with grace...it might even make one try harder next time...I know may people who have fought to win...yet they take their losses and move on....a good comment!
Warmly, B













Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

21 Hours Ago

Thanks Betty, and yes, you're right of course - losses, failures can often teach us more than succes.. read more
Betty Hermelee

7 Hours Ago

you are Very Welcome Dylan
Warmly, B🌷🌷🌷
Indeed, it is your misplays that invariably determine your finishing place. ~Jim

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Dylan Macadham

1 Day Ago

Yeah, a moment can change everything. Thanks Jim :)
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MCS
But to continue to err is insanity. Another hard-hitting piece my friend.

Posted 1 Day Ago


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Dylan Macadham

1 Day Ago

Correction: Mary! ... I'm so sorry, my friend, I'm trying to go too fast!😮
MCS

1 Day Ago

LOL, no worries
Dylan Macadham

1 Day Ago

Thanks Mary! I feel better😊

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Added on February 19, 2025
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