A Lover's Right!

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A Lover's Right!

Needing to be right

is your prelude to a fight,

and no snugs tonight.

.  .  .

But always take care 

 and win a tiff here and there, 

to declaw the bear.

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In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

"I'd far rather be happy than right any day."-Douglas Adams

Author's Note

...Am I right or am I right? :)

Reviews

[Martiya Daman]

This Senryu is about fights in relationships and how needing to be right can cause problems. I like how it talks about taking care and winning small arguments to keep things calm. It's fun to read, and I think it teaches a good lesson, Dylan.

Was pretty hard to understand for a kid tho :)

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks so much Martiya, love your analysis! and glad you thought it was fun :) ...haha, you're one of the smartest kids I know!!!😊

[Martiya Daman]

Nah, needed a help of an adult :|

[Dylan Macadham]

Wow! That must be a very wise adult! :)

[Martiya Daman]

Tru .

[Dylan Macadham]

............😅

[A.H.]

lol! another fun write.. very witty! you got a way with words here, Dylan. enjoyed reading it, thank you.

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks AH for such a nice review! :)

[W. Barrett Munn]

Three questions a husband should ask himself:
1. Does this need to be said?
2. Does this need to be said now?
3. Does this need to be said now by me?

[Dylan Macadham]

Love this! Literally laughed out loud. Perfect! ...wish I could go back in time and read these 3 Q's afresh😅

[Desert Knave]

The need to be right is pretty much toxic at times. Nice write. ~Jim

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks so much Jim! :)

[Thomas W Case]

You hit the nail on the head. Excellent.

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks Thomas! :)

[Neville]

You ain’t wrong so you must by definition be write ..😎👍

[Dylan Macadham]

A witty Brit! Blessed be me!🤣

[Neville]

Consider thy self thus endowed 😎

[Dylan Macadham]

........😂🤣

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and never go to bed angry at each other...work it out first.

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks Jacob, good advice in theory :)

[Soren]

Wisdom for the hasty and feisty.

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks, nice summary Soren.