How to lose a Man

Snippets, in 3 lines ...

How to lose a Man

Loving him too much,

sometimes makes a man wonder,

"Can I do better?"

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In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

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Ha, Ringa ding ding,

Could turnabout be true too?

...Is it a girl thing?

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 :)

Reviews

[hiren]

Hi Dylan,
Alas we like or mary bigenders thinking the person will match us because we hide us that we are bigenders. The husband gets fooled after death that i thought my wife was good but she feels i didnt satisfy in bed because she wasnt a female and she neded a female but i was a man.
I feel people expose too much the sexual organs that they try to attract and act knowing men weak points because they never grt satisfied and you few people nature never changes leech can never become ant and vice versa.

I thought chanak is trying to prove bigender daughter is so young and naive but alas that daughter is more who feeds on females. Poor dad never understood till death and was very proud about his family. If he would hav been alive and heard about his wife and daughter he would hav suicided with high BP.

People losing their owm ethics runnning behind sex and money
What they can do . I used to see beggars im trains of single gender now bisexuals by exposing their beauy of hard rouck busts and female shaft and mKe hole.

What we can do everyone needs paise and then sleep no matter a very fat shaft that can make them satisfy with begged money in rich countries.

I love my husband he is my God and he knows how to repair weak and wicked hearts.

Yhank yoi
Dont mean offended its just lol
Dont know what people are thinking of their own body and body guards who hav been. Protecting from hardship.

Jessy Jacob

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks for your thoughts Jessy,
It see you read this piece before I replaced the word 'bi-gender' (a confusing choice on my part) with what I meant in the first place: as it reads now ... just a boy and girl thing :)

[bred Brick Keshner]

Language, both verbal and nonverbal can be a funny thing, not to mention the differences of gender encultured communication styles.

[Dylan Macadham]

All's fair in Love & War(between the sexes)😅
...Thanks RB!

[bred Brick Keshner]

You’re definitely most welcome 🙏🏻🕊️

[Neville]

The first has more than just a ring of truth to it & made me smile bigly .. the second, made me make an involuntary noise that had a certain ringa to it .. I blamed the dog .. and you of course .. Neville

[Dylan Macadham]

Bigly Smiles are my aim, Cheers mate! Don't be too hard on the dog, it was me :)

[Pryde Foltz]

I giggled at that first one. Thanks for the reminder to keep a streak of b***h alive ... lol

[Dylan Macadham]

haha, Badass Rules!😅

[Chris Shaw]

So right on the first count. Tell a man you love him and for sure he’ll think you are a liar and look elsewhere. How do I know, because I’ve done it. Second scenario, I have no thoughts because I am still hung up on the first.

Chris

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks Chris, an interesting take :) ... mine was more along the lines of 'if you tell a jerk you love him it may energize his feeble ego to cheat.' ...and yes, such hang-ups sure do take time to get thru.

[Chris Shaw]

Yeah. Keep quiet. It pays off long term and keeps them guessing:)

[Dylan Macadham]

Yes, the olde fashioned way! Keeping us guys guessing is the ticket! And, in a crazy way we kinda prefer that too😎

[Stella Armour]

been there on both counts , getting taken for granted happens sometimes when we love too much , and you don't always discover the bi-gender in the early days.

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks Stella! haha, I'm starting to wonder about my word choice of bi-gender, all I meant was Do both males & females wonder if they can do better😅

[Stella Armour]

haha, me reading that as my personal experience of a husband who also liked men ....take it as you read it i think .😂

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks Stella, I'm gonna re-word! :)
...sorry to hear about the ex :(

[Stella Armour]

no problem , i was just young and niaive* (can never spell that word)

Stella

[Dylan Macadham]

Ah, to be young & Nigh-Eve again!🤣

[Stella Armour]

😂😂😂 ......

[emmajoygreen]

Two beauts: first one, 'maybe'. Second: 'who or which knows' Many thanks for smiles.

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks emmajoy! I wrote this with tongue-in-cheek so I'm happy for your Smiles😊

[emmajoygreen]

smiles cost nothing but can mean a lot!

[Dylan Macadham]

........😄