Empty Answers ...

Empty Answers ...

A Poem by Dylan Macadham
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a Snippet, in 3 lines ...

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"Sensei, please tell me,
Can we escape our nature?"
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"Yes, and no, my child."
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In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

...Is an Answer clothed in a robe necessarily wise?

© 2025 Dylan Macadham


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But if we could escape our nature, wouldn't what we escape to become our nature?
That was my attempt to be a proper growed up, but now in just more stumped.
I do like being succinct, but some answers to questions only bring more buts and what ifs that make my head ouch!
So ill stick with my first answer, but can i phone a friend or take 50/50 please? 😃

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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a very clever philosophical work. truly zen, the answer is a contradiction, yet there is hidden truth. we cannot exape our nature, and that has been proven by me over and over again. yet we are also able to change ourselves in some incredible ways. that is also true and something i've beent rying lately. we'll see how that goes.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks EM! I appreciate your take :)
But if we could escape our nature, wouldn't what we escape to become our nature?
That was my attempt to be a proper growed up, but now in just more stumped.
I do like being succinct, but some answers to questions only bring more buts and what ifs that make my head ouch!
So ill stick with my first answer, but can i phone a friend or take 50/50 please? 😃

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometime the answers aren’t clear. We must find our own answers and we must decided to change our own nature ourselves and that can only be answered with time and dedication to wanting to be different

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

2 Weeks Ago

So True! Thanks :)
Kinda true,.... Empty answers
Good work Dylan...

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

2 Weeks Ago

Hi Fairy! Thanks :)
Fairy

2 Weeks Ago

Hey Dylan....

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Added on January 18, 2025
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Dylan Macadham
Dylan Macadham

Seattle, WA



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