In & Out ...!

a Snippet, in 3 lines ...

... And then She walked in,

... and I glimpsed my undoing,

and got the hell out.

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In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

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Love old movies. Femme Fatales knew how to make an entrance!

Reviews

[Vol]

Macadham,
Ha, been there, been undone. I find I am better for it, an would do it again... Lori was a loaded six gun, and the scars are still there to keep me company.
Vol

[MCS]

Fan of old movies as well and those women knew how to work a room and stop a freight train with a glance.
I really enjoy your three liners!