Relation Ships

a Haiku poem in 3 lines

A Relation Ship,

tested against storm tossed seas,

sails home on a breeze.

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Haiku: Japanese poem of 17 syllables in 3 lines of 5, 7 & 5, 

including images of the natural world

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Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Dylan.. if only that were True… I would not be so Blue. tenderly, Pat

[Dylan Macadham]

Maybe wishful thinking on my part, huh?
A Nice Rhyming Review ...Sent by You :)

[Patricia Wedel]

Actually, your Poem is worth Framing with a Golden Frame… simply a lovely Haiku that describes Storm-tossed Seas in a Relation Ship; however, sails home on a Breeze. gently, Pat

[lessa (kenzie)]

Simply Amazing, I love this.

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks again, Alex!

[Chris Shaw]

Clever play on words. Weathering the storms together and then enjoying the plain sailing in calmer waters. Yep that's relationships for you. Sometimes you hit inclement weather. You've got to be a good sailor at times :)

Chris

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks Chris, "Clever" is music to my Inner Praise-Seeker :)
Red sky at night, sailors delight,
Red sky in morning, sailors warning.
...my Dad, a boy navy-sailor in WW2, taught me this.

[Haley]

This is a fantastic haiku, possibly one of the best I've seen in a minute. This is what relationships are all about, weathering the storms and trying to become stronger in order to be able to "sail home on a breeze". Good job! :)

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks Haley :)
...maybe there's a planet out there where relationships don't have to be worked at ...Nah :)

[barleygirl]

This might contain the key to why I've been relation shipless for the past 30 years. It's always felt wiser to avoid seasickness (((HUGS)))

[Dylan Macadham]

...at last! Common-Sense Avoidance, wish I'd thought of that! (actually I did, and even practiced it from time to time, but soon missed the battle :)