Land, not Sea!

a Haiku poem in 3 lines ...

Something is afoot

my ten toes are telling me,

go by land, not sea.

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Haiku: Japanese poem of 17 syllables in 3 lines of 5, 7 & 5, 

including images of the natural world

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Reviews

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

Guess your instincts are right aren't they ? , Something tells me that the ocean isn't so keen on visitors , wouldn't want u drowned now would I ? :))

[Chris Shaw]

Yeah, unless you are Jesus Chris, better to walk on land rather than water. Look at the moods of the ocean, fickle is she, especially in bad weather. Hit the road Jack, safer by far.

Chris

[Dylan Macadham]

haha, I am neither JC,
nor a reasonable facsimile.
Clever of you too pick up on that,
but now, tell me true, Was your "Jesus Chris" a typo, a Freudian Slip, or can You walk on water? :D

[Chris Shaw]

Ha, a typo. And a funny one. At the current time I am nowhere near walking on water, more like up to my neck in it :)

[Dylan Macadham]

...just rain I hope, not indoor flooding :(

[Chris Shaw]

Nothing wrong with me plumbing:) Just other shite :))

[Dylan Macadham]

..."me plumbing," huh? I'll let that one go :D haha
Yeah, OtherShite is the worst! Take care Chris :)