Tweak the Ride!

A Verse in 11 lines

Beginnings

become

endings,

and endings,

beginnings;

take this

in stride,

and try

as you can

to tweak

 the ride.

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Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Quite a meaningful write this one. Sad if beginnings become endings. I like beginnings because endings are far too sorrowful. However, endings do provide pathways for new opportunities. Tweaking the ride, fighting like hell. That sounds to me as though effort is being put in to stop the endings. Thoughtful piece of brevity here Dylan.

Chris

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks Chris, for a thoughtful review :)
...just realized that "take in stride, and fight like hell," is a tad contradictory haha. Seems my little offering needs tweaking :)
...speaks to the wisdom of 'sleeping on a poem' before sending it in :)

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

11 verses with each verse so candid , Love the Poem Dylan
Love
Kathy
PS: Try writing haikus ! , i find it real difficult but they are amazing to read , its like reading a whole book in 3 likes

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks Kathy! :)
I'll check out 3-line haikus. Funny, I thought 11 or 12 lines is short :)

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

Cool , you're welcome ...Lmao me too , i usually write long poems
Love
Kathy