If I make it through this, I'll be just fine

A song I've began to write about a boy who has flirted with suicide and God talks to him and saves him.. just give it a listen(:

I’m a waste of breath, I’m never gonna fit in.

I know the end, before it even begins.

Nothing ever goes my way, and that’s just how it is.

 I try to change my life, but even when I do, it still doesn't feel right,
I’ll never be good enough for anyone anyway, so I just bow my head and pray.

  I wish one day I could feel God’s fingertips;

I’d turn and he’d say, “Look at me boy…. You’re my son and I gave you that breath, I made you to fit in, you don’t know the end, because you’ve barely began. I have a plan for you, Oh how I love you. Just never give up on

me, cuz I’ll never give up on you..

 

So I think about my God, and I know he loves me so,

 he made this life for us to live so Why would I cry, when it’s not time to go.

  I’ll live life to the fullest and never look back, cuz (friendship/young love) fades, but his love lasts.         

I’m running out of options, lifes moving so fast.  It’s now or never and I choose now,

One day I’ll look back and say …. “Look who I am today, look what I almost gave away, times were tough, I felt defeat,”

Author's Note

Please tell me everything that needs changed, what you like, what you don't like, or what I could add. thanks(:

Reviews

[BabyBear]

Very good poem! You have the ability to search deep within yourself to find those hidden gems that only a true poet and writer can find and then be able to express in a way that others will find interesting and 'true'. Not too many have that ability. It is a gift from GOD! And you have it! Use it for His glory and your benefit! But never, NEVER go so far as to look too deep inside and then want to go there and hide. There are too many people who love you and would miss you tremendously!!!

[SwagMaster]

Loved it! Very expressive and beautiful.

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