Sincerity

What is happening to me?

My eyes are bleeding, my soul is crying

I’m lying here, all alone with my screaming

The thorns of black roses digging into my skin

The agony swallowing me whole

 

On the other side of my mind

Your body is against mine, warm delight

And you whispered, please don’t go

 

I would watch you late at night

When you were just breathing and dreaming

I touched your cheek with my fingertips

And you would whimper in your sleep

I would smile at you then

 

I held you close in the half-darkness

Promising to never let you go

The fountain of my sincerity overflowed…

Author's Note

Collaborative poem with Aianarie. Tell us what you think. :-)

Reviews

[Proxy]

Wow. I really like it. You and your friend have amazing talent.

I don't even know what to write, this poem really left me speechless.

[ravenjess]

awesome job, both of you!! I really like this. I think i will print this out and hang it on my wall ^^ thanks you guys for sharing!!

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Oh, I remember this! Wow, you really polished it up, didn't you? ;)