These Hazel Eyes

Lost for so long until love finally opened her hazel eyes agian.

 

 

 

All these secrets left untold,

Things never spoken out loud,

But you know them all,

You can see behind these hazel eyes.

 

All this time I’ve been

Hiding from the world,

But you came along

And broke through these hazel eyes.

 

My eyes had grown dark,

Wounded from the past,

But you brought the light

Back to these hazel eyes.

 

It seemed to me

That the world didn’t care,

But when you opened these hazel eyes,

I let my heart shine through.

Reviews

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I like this poem. It says a lot to the reader. I don't have hazel eyes but I think I can relate to this. Very nice job!

[Catrinka]

This is a great write! I love the imagery and depth you show here. Good job!

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Got to love hazel eyes.... Hazel eyes i think are some of the most amazing eyes because honestly i think that they show such emotions but then again i have hazel eyes... This is a great piece and i love the imagery you have in it...

It kind of reminded me of how my eyes used to be... they used to be brown and then they've changed more to green sense i've gotten happier or something... lol....

Great Job!

[Wolfwind Words]

What a wonderful peice of patience and reward for those good things that do come!
Your imagery was spot on and it flowed well into my minds eye as i read it.
Keep those creative juices flowing!
Great Write! :)

[NCPanthersgurl]

I love the word Hazel for some reason =] That's probably another reason I love this poem, haha, despite that it's well written. Keep them coming Tracy!!! =]