The Battle has Just Begun

The Battle has Just Begun

A Poem by deyja
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through this poem everyone is living through hell and we need to find the light to get out.

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The battle has just begun. For me the battle started the day i was born. When I was born the devil said,"OH NO! Competition!" People always doubt you because of what they first see in you. Your appearance maybe skinny muscles and all bone, but inside you have a strong heart. So when people see you they think you are very weak because you are all bones and no muscle. FIGHT for YOUR SPOT like somebody is up 24 hours a day trying to take your spot. People always say that once we die we either go up there with god or go down, but we are already in hell because everybody is struggling. Hell is where you have to suffer. Well we are suffering. Homeless people on the streets. Moms' have to raise a child by herself with barely any money. Teens in gangs, dropping out of school, getting pregnant. When we die we will go to heaven because we are living the horrible life. To get out you have to find the light to success. The success is doing a career that you loved ever since you were a kid. The battle will never end until you realize that to get out is to believe and then achieve. -THAT KID

© 2014 deyja


Author's Note

deyja
forgive me on my grammar and punctuation,but other than that i hope that you feel inspired.

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i can relate too this an 100%. great work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

deyja

10 Years Ago

thanks for that comment
Chicago

10 Years Ago

you're welcome

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