MY BLACK TIE

You are the item I dread to wear

I think It's best you stay In there

You're tucked away In a drawer

I don't want to wear you anymore

My face It's always etched with pain

When It's time to find you once again

Still stained with tears that I did cry

I loathe that search for my black tie

Reviews

[Brandon Langley]

Nice poem, I like how the rhyme is subtle enough to not seem forced, but still fleshed out enough to keep the cadence going.
Also, this seems like the poem seems as if it should be spoken before playing this song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pj7mEyjvXKA