DUTY CALLS

DUTY CALLS

A Poem by Olufix

The sun begins its dance in the clouds.
Slumber takes a hint and bows.
Water and lather caress.
Am enjoyed in their warmness.
Some garments worn, adornments on.
Amendments, none
Am off to rehearse.

Comfortable on rail,
By a male with a braille,
A woman deep in her mail.
Theater gripped my brain.
I pondered all the way,
The persons at shoulder-blade.
One blind, other hale.

At the theatre, I made my say,
Proposing a worthy play,
Reference, my adventurous day.
Some be pale, others hale.
The hale need ensure heartiness for the pale.
The play approved,
A message produced.

© 2014 Olufix


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Olufix
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Funny poem! I love your new 2014 poem even I was curious reading your new stuffs and I special logged in to read your poem because I remember, you'd told me that you'll drop your new write on Monday and today it's Monday.

I enjoyed this poem especially the IInd one stand, that's funny. I love the ending too where you combined the thoughts from reality and pasted into the words beautifully. I adore this poem. Your rhyme is not that bad, it's cool.

All the best, buddy.
Keep Writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Olufix

10 Years Ago

Stephen, thanks for the review. Am glad you enjoyed it. Am overjoyed and honoured by this.



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Funny poem! I love your new 2014 poem even I was curious reading your new stuffs and I special logged in to read your poem because I remember, you'd told me that you'll drop your new write on Monday and today it's Monday.

I enjoyed this poem especially the IInd one stand, that's funny. I love the ending too where you combined the thoughts from reality and pasted into the words beautifully. I adore this poem. Your rhyme is not that bad, it's cool.

All the best, buddy.
Keep Writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Olufix

10 Years Ago

Stephen, thanks for the review. Am glad you enjoyed it. Am overjoyed and honoured by this.

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Olufix
Olufix

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I'm an aspiring writer and animator, a gospel rapper. I love journeying into the world of discovery. I have a high voltage flare for the exceptionally unusual and new. I own a blog - www.championsmeal.. more..

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A Poem by Olufix