Whatever this is

Whatever this is

A Poem by MoonChild

I'm feeling sad, bitter and raw
I've thrown all my emotions out the door
My absence you haven't noticed
Preoccupied with stress and sadness
Too busy chasing dreams failing to see what is falling apart at the seams
Neglecting those you love until disaster makes you see
There are problems in life
As well as dreams

Fail to tell me
Keep on neglecting me and I won't be able to control of all this fire
Burning deep down inside of me
Maybe if you had spoken to me
I would have known

Maybe if I knew
I'd choose a different tone

Why didn't you think to ask me for help?
I would have given you all of myself

Don't think for one minute that your stress would push me to my limit
I'm here for you, I have been from the moment we started this
Whatever THIS is
So let's agree to keep up communication
Stopping any further frustration

Our first row
Passionate and true
Settled it with a kiss
And go back to whatever this is

© 2017 MoonChild


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A fantastic loving plea.thank you for sharing a piece of your heart.

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Interesting poem. The train station of life has a way of getting many of us on board.

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Fantastic. One of your best, truly raw and from the heart.

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Added on September 14, 2017
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MoonChild
MoonChild

United Kingdom



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I started writing poetry in secondary school (high school) - after having one published I stopped, now at age 28 I've started writing again. more..

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A Poem by MoonChild



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