Moon Child

Moon Child

A Poem by MoonChild


Moving to this path was an excellent manoeuvre

A key to a brighter future

Through this life I have walked
Listened more than I have talked
Now I've learnt my lessons I stand here and preach
For what I know, no one can teach

I've seen the magic in front of my face
I've felt it
touched it
and it had a beautiful taste
It taught me my mission is to help others strive
To be a better person and thrive
To stand up for what is right
Putting perspective in sight

Listen to these words that I speak
I'm not a weirdo or a freak
Im here to Inspire
To bring you all that you desire
A nudge in the right direction
My undivided attention

I am a child to the moon
A stand-alone spiritual warrior
I cause no harm or bring no bother
For these secrets that I hold
Give me the power and light
To make everything right

So listen to the words I speak
If it's happiness you seek



© 2017 MoonChild


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Am I right in thinking that you are speaking as a preacher to help others, inspire them to improve their lives. These lines are a bit puzzling though 'For these secrets that I hold Forever to be untold'
and seem to contradict the last two lines.
You got lots of good ideas here but maybe you need to think through the message you are trying to get across.
Hope this helps.
Alan

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 7 Years Ago


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MoonChild
MoonChild

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I started writing poetry in secondary school (high school) - after having one published I stopped, now at age 28 I've started writing again. more..

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A Poem by MoonChild