See~through

See~through

A Poem by MoonChild

You mistook my hurting for weakness
I don't know how - but you made me feel this
Love was a vague memory until meeting you
Blinded by your lust
But now I can see through

I see all the way through you
Through the clouds in your head and the lies in your eyes
Your mask I see right behind
And the truth i do find
I know your inner most secrets
The thoughts you buried deepest
The fears that occupy your mind
I know if I look harder more I will find

Don't underestimate my divine power
I see and hear more than I desire
One step ahead of your next move
I know which way your going to choose

It's not me that's caught in your web
My spell you be under
Come at me
And I'll bring the thunder

© 2017 MoonChild


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Hmm. Deliciously defiant!

And it is true....many DO see pain and hurt as a sign of weakness, when in fact it is more the sign of courage and depth. For to hurt and feel pain at the loss of love is to love wholeheartedly. And to love in that way requires great strength and integrity. Anything less is not love at all.

A nice write. One written with broken heart on sleeve and fire in the eye.

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Love ❤️ this one Did you see this coming

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Andy D

7 Years Ago

Always do. Even when ppl think I don't
Andy D

7 Years Ago

Being blocked 1st and last as song goes. My last comment. Thanks again for your words. K
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7 Years Ago

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Strong, powerful and Lordy! I'm glad to read work like this. "You mistook my hurting for weakness"? When strong women hurt, they start carrying matches in their back pocket. This is a declaration and a warning - I. Love. It.

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Hmm. Deliciously defiant!

And it is true....many DO see pain and hurt as a sign of weakness, when in fact it is more the sign of courage and depth. For to hurt and feel pain at the loss of love is to love wholeheartedly. And to love in that way requires great strength and integrity. Anything less is not love at all.

A nice write. One written with broken heart on sleeve and fire in the eye.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Beautifully written..........

Always fear intuition of woman...

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MoonChild
MoonChild

United Kingdom



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I started writing poetry in secondary school (high school) - after having one published I stopped, now at age 28 I've started writing again. more..

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A Poem by MoonChild