Undone

I had a sinking feeling in my gut
But the words I could not muster up
The image of you and her sitting upon the martial bed
Did the thought of me even enter your head?

Pandora's box had been opened
Feelings spoke about but they were too hardened
Bringing it all back to the surface and I cannot handle the emotions

Too many questions I have unanswered
Your efforts more and more substandard
The fire in our love fizzled out
From the very moment I started to doubt

I had given you all of my devotion
And you buried it all, all in one motion
You made me talk about the things I had buried deep
You mended me piece by piece

And now I find myself back at the beginning
The love inside of me thinning
Back to square one
Empty and undone

Author's Note

Thoughts please x

Reviews

[AcasualPawn]

Broken heart makes u mature or makes u dread .....

Here it perfectly shows later one..
Nice read

[Jes' Pi]

Hello!
So..
Your poem is very good, but you need to work a little more. It's a very good begginig, But try to give it a soul. Try to use less words, and let the feelings speak.

xx

[Matthew Kult]

Dreadfully Familiar

Sensually Collapsing

Great Read

Matthew