Thoughts from the floor

Thoughts from the floor

A Poem by MoonChild

I've been hurt too many times before
Too many times I've picked myself up off the floor
My ego battered and bruised by your words
Your treatment left me blurred

How can I find the strength to carry on
When I'm lost, empty and alone
From the moment you walked out the door
I can no longer pick myself up from this floor

Is this who I am now?
Emotionally dead?
I cried so much there are no more tears left

No longer will anyone feel my love or hear me roar
I just lay here
On the floor

© 2017 MoonChild


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This is such an inspirational piece and says so much in every stanza. Keep it up!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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You always think that way.
But in reality, you should be thinking.
I'm to good for you anyway.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This is hard to read and absorb as its so emotional and gut wrenching. Whew!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Franky

7 Years Ago

Yes. I read a lot on this site and i only comment on that which i think is quality. Well done.
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Added on August 31, 2017
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MoonChild
MoonChild

United Kingdom



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I started writing poetry in secondary school (high school) - after having one published I stopped, now at age 28 I've started writing again. more..

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