Shoulders of the World

Shoulders of the World

A Poem by D Connolly
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A ride on my dad's shoulders

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Riding high on the shoulders of the World

I recall taking the plum from the tree

The sweetest flavor I can ever remember

Today I relish the memory

The sweetness of that day lingers still

Riding high on the shoulders of the World

© 2017 D Connolly


Author's Note

D Connolly
Walking through the forests of Germany on a march with my dad, which we did often, I took a plum from a tree, just as described, and I remember that sweetness so well, 30+ years later. The sweetest part of the memory is being on my dad's shoulders and just being with him.

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'Shoulders of the World'
D.Connolly,
High on the shoulders of your Daddy..what else could a little girl need?
The feeling is, "I am loved, I am wanted, needed and cherished.'
The sweetness of belonging and finding it delicious is matched by the
treat of a plumb while on the 'shoulders of the world' Your world.
Blessings,
Kathy


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

D Connolly

5 Years Ago

one of my best memories, by far



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Nice. Sitting on the shoulder of giants, feeling like the owner of the world and never wanting it to end. Happy days, turned into happy memories that can never be forgotten. :)
And it's got the flavour of the plum to remind you too, every time you feel a little nostalgic, just pop into the greengrocers and remember the smiles.

Posted 7 Years Ago


D Connolly

7 Years Ago

Thanks Nemo, I've been thinking about that day for a few days now and it makes me smile
Lorry

7 Years Ago

We all got 'em Dani. Mine usually involve smells and tastes too....The first time I went to a footba.. read more
D Connolly

7 Years Ago

I even want an empire biscuit right now LOL ;)
So cool D :) those memories are sweet and life long. What a gem! R xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


D Connolly

7 Years Ago

thank-you

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