Not Tonight

some guys have all the luck.. or not....

 

One glance
One chance
Those hips
Stop traffic
I gotta have it
I step
Come correct
Breath check
Pop mint
Offer drink
Money spent
But hey!!

Please don’t
Walk away
Not today
Been so long
I need some
She’s gone
I'm done
I suck
Need luck
I really wanted to
Hit that..
Aww man…

Aww Damn
Guess I
Have plans
With my
Big hands

Damn it!!

Reviews

[ms.trelly]

I really like this! Its funny. I like your style of writing.

[deleted]

Comical! I can relate to this poem. We as women sometimes have that majic touch on men lol.

[ms.trelly]

lmao! dats funny

[Constance L. Hartwell]

hahaha!!! you always put a smile on my face with your unique pieces. Beautiful.

[Legion]

lol and so sad as well. Good write. No the feeling. You might like my piece "Threesome" after reading this. Kudos to you.