You Cheated on Valentines, You Shouldn't Have

 

Valentines again…

 

I’m pacing

Sippin on vodka straight

No chasing

It was a year ago

I caught her cheating

Saw her lover the next day

Gave him a beating

He was lucky to be breathing..

So were you

I almost came to your place
And bathed you in hot grits while you were sleeping

Time was supposed to heal that scar
But I still almost hit you with my car
And didn’t blink

 

I think

I need to get a grip

Still seeing visions of him inside your hips

Makin me sick
Wishing you endless orgasms
With an HIV patient
Wanting to massage your throat

Til’ you leave a suicide note

Putting sugar in your gas tank is juvenile

That didn’t stop me from doing it

I couldn’t get past the new lock at your place

So I stuck glue in it

I was losing it

 

I watch you often

 

Wondering

What does he have

That leaves me broken

Taking up smoking..

I’m choking up

I swore to love you

Til’ the end

But

After I saw you grin

I knew

He was more than a friend

When

I saw you

And him

Walking in the rain

I longed to cause you both pain

 

But next year

 

Another Valentine’s Day

 

This won’t happen again

After the world sees this video

I’ll be doing 5 to 10

I’m done being bitter

So the gun is loaded

Hand on trigger

The camera is on

Smile.. you’re gonna be a star at…..

 

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Reviews

[ms.trelly]

This was great!! Very different. Love can make you do some crazy things and cause serious emotional problems like this! i think you captured that very well with this piece. I really love the flow of it. Like all of your work, great job!

[perfectlymetiKulous]

this is deliriously edgy,
and anyone who has ever been cheated on can:
understand
appreciate
recognize
commiserate,
and understand how such thoughts, such dark emotions can still manage to leave you with a slight grin on your face. like, "yeah, i totally know what you were feeling."

wow. amazing. thanks for the read request. i very much enjoyed this poem.

[Everything Happens For ..]

amazing write,
really gets across the betrayal
And the fast pace makes it suitably neurotic and urgent
"I think
I need to get a grip
Still seeing visions of him inside your hips
Makin me sick
Wishing you endless orgasms
With an HIV patient
Wanting to massage your throat
Til' you leave a suicide note"
- absolutely awesome.

xo

[mR668]

Man, you NEVER cease to amaze with the edge of your seat, heavy breathing, pupils dilated type of writes you do. Another Great Adventure! Thank you! Loved it! And YES, I clicked on the URL!!! LMAO