I Choose You

 

I didn’t fall for you

I wasn’t tripped

Didn’t drift

Didn’t slip

I didn’t accidentally feel

Emotions

Based on the sensation of your lips

The vast oceans in your hips

This bliss

Was written in Sanskrit

Before our first glance

First dance

Our first kiss

Before we were born

And when we’re dead and gone

This love will live on

A silhouette of

Your perfect frame

Whispered my name

Across time

Divinely designating

You

Mine

Your perfect imperfections

Cherished

I live to hear the sweet octaves

Of your voice

My soul is convinced

Not because you seduced

 

See… love is a choice

 

As our darks become grays

Every second of every day

The scent of our love shall remain new

Thru

Ups, downs…

Highs…. Lows…

Because my heart depends on it

 

Love is a choice

 

And I’ll always choose you

Reviews

[Tasha]

This is beautiful. Love is a choice. This brought a smile to my face. I loved it.

[Cherie]

Not an accident but a choice. Love, a mending choice. (I'm humbled by the more elaborate delivery).

[LJW]

This is beautiful.

I am quite sure you can get paid for this.

Have you heard of Blue Mountain Arts? ( a greeting card company)

Please Google it and look at their submission guidelines.

I have sold 2 cards to them. They are quite legitimate. I would put money on this one of yours being published by them.

[cest la vie]

Such a beautiful expression of love written in this piece. The whole piece just flowed like a slow, trickling waterfall. Absolutely wonderful write. This will be in my favorites!!

Lynne

[lovelyricalpoetry]

Wow! I loved this one. True love is hard to find, but it is definately forever. You have expressed the way I feel about my soulmate that I have been with for 14 years now. Great job.

Anna

[Marie Anzalone]

So true- it is always a choice we make, every day. Nicely stated.

[Jimmy Greenie]

Love is a choice, and I will always choose you.
Brilliant stuff! and excellent last two lines!

[lindsay]

aw.. this poem just brought a smile to my face. It was so sweet and sincere. Wonderfully written

[Masq]

Well Mr. DC Gentleman, I see that you are quite the romantic at heart. This piece is so beautiful & romantic! The words are so endearing that it's ALMOST surprising that they came from the heart of a man. (No insult intended) I too loved every line. Beautiful Write!!

[John Morris]

That was a good little love poem.

I liked it.