Smoke With Me

 

 

Took you from my man
Your beauty was priceless
Lust in my eyes
I sized my prize
Knew you had to be mine
Admiring your thickness
Much more than a dime
First kiss you had me
Hooked
Creating a hunger
An insatiable greed
Incited my creativity

Must admit I need you
Close my eyes and breathe you
When we’re alone
Anxious to be lost
In your euphoric zone
I slowly slide open those chocolate thighs
And ready the poetic potpourri
Saliva secures my love inside

You call out for flame
It seems to know your name
We blaze
Thru a smoke tinted haze
The kaleidoscope of color beckons
Glancing at my hands
Fingers separate into sections
Maybe I’m tripping
Reality..
Losing a grip
Yet … this
Is
Bliss

No stress..
Inspired.
No pain..
I love this dame
Savoring another sweet kiss
I whisper her name
I’m so in love with...

Mary Jane


2009.DC

Reviews

[Andrés Danilo He..]

Honestly, I don't like poems, and I can not in any way relate to your poem but for once... Man, I seriously fell in love with yours. Keep it up!

[Kevin Vorshak]

Well written. I like the tone of this very much. Far more sensual than "Don't Bogart that Joint" from Easy Rider!!!

[Cherry Berry]

This was surprisingly very sensual... I loved the comparison to a woman. Well penned.
xox
Cherri

[Kgosi]

ahhh dode... dode... dode- your slick man, the words man, the words.

[wolfsshadow25]

love every word that was said
i can defiantly relate

[SnailMadness]

this is a beautiful poem i love the Reefer awesome poem!

[Jessica M.]

Such a beautiful high.
Who the hell wouldn't love Mary Jane?

[Raef C. Boylan]

You did a good job with the parallels between the stuff someone says when they're in love with a person, and the love we feel for MJ. Excellent romance haha.

Good write.
Thanks for sharing - and cheers for reviewing me.

[ruth]

hehe.. i really enjoyed reading this poem.
you really did describe the process of doing mj..
hehe..
-ruth

[Thunderlyrics]

That was smokin'!

I love your affectionate terminology for this infusion!