Origami

Haiku

Floating through the air

White wings whisper to the night

Tales of the crane’s flight

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Floating upon beauty pinions...Bravo

[DCT ponderings]

HeHe... even in your reviews I learn. Had to look up pinions. Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Thank you...:)

[DCT ponderings]

Thanks so much. I have never written Senryu. I will have to look up the form and give it a try as well.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I am a fan of Haiku...I've written many and had the pleasure and honor of having 5 published in the Boston Literary Review a while back. I took almost an entire year and dedicated it completely to the Haiku and Senryu. You've created an enchanting image here...just what this form is supposed to inspire and evoke. Well written. Going into my favorites!