You Just Wanna Know They Care

A Poem by D.C.Randon

Have you ever felt this way...?

You just wanna know they care

At your phone

You stare

Hopelessly hoping

For a flash of light

Eyes blinded by the glare

As the beam

Seems

To cut through the dark

The sharp

Stark contrast

A welcome pain

To the window panes of the soul

You have no control

They push all of your buttons

As your mind summons

The power to withstand the wait

The hate

The love

The slate that you carry on your back

Ready to be wiped clean

With the unforeseen promise of another day.

© 2012 D.C.Randon

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Yellow Butterfly

We are such fickle souls and all need reassurance that someone out there cares even if it means hanging on to every possibility.....even if it is via technology.

A wonderful write :O)

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thank you Yellow Butterfly! Do you think we ever reach a point where we no longer require the reassu.. read more

12 Years Ago

Yes, when we start believing in ourselfs that we are worth much more.... ;o)

MOON

Lovely flow , hoping it would ring flash sms awful waiting.

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thank you Moon. It appears to be a feeling many know all too well in this digital age.

Elizabeth McNeill

Ugh, if I had a nickel for every time I watched and hoped that a flash would come across my phone screen.

Patience is indeed a virtue, and with that being said, it takes patience to truly learn patience.

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Isn't it, and doesn't it just, Elizabeth! I will forever be it's student.

12 Years Ago

As will we all, ultimately.

Michael G.

Waiting games are hard to play... whether on the phone or elsewhere.
Good write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thank you Michael, I appreciate you taking the time out to say this.

Such a great ramble of thoughts... I guess everyone have watched his/her phone for that important flash light some times... I really enjoyed the flow, and words...

E.L.