Clouds, Birds, Rains, Us: The Tenth CircleA Poem by DCjourney from looking without to within.I looked out through the glass windows and watched them floating. Like thick wisps of darkened smoke, regurgitated from a factory chimney, in slow motion, drifting across the vast sky, while all around a blanket of heavy darkness seemed to settle, like some watchful mother, smothering her child to her breasts. I kept watching as with dimming daylight, they appeared, leagues of them, some though single, steering a course towards home, forgotten during the hustle bustle of the day. I heard them tweeting, seemingly mindless chattering that was really a floating huddle, an impromptu meeting for exchanging the news for the day, or perhaps singing one last song together, before parting for the night, each on a different note, yet striking strangely a symphony, so harmonious that the mind and ears that listened, secretly savoured the spontaneity. All this time, they continued; the familiar pitter patter, reckless trickles and streaming bursts, muddied moistness rising to the nostrils, a strong scent reminding of existential earthiness, while resplendent greens go viral with fertility and runs from contamination. Did anyone mind? Not the world, none but them, chained to their mean-minded boundaries, yet their carousing and sometimes, sober revelries were full of uninhibited bandying of punch words and lines, accompanied by psychedelic item numbers and lustful lap-dances. They defined everything earnestly, claimed all with boastful generosity, conceit never sounded so natural and deserving. Were they so blind that the cloying illusions escaped their notice, and their puny existence, overlooked; hungry appropriation of the bounties, unremitting; like some ridiculously over-fattened lord ravishing the larder’s content and the maiden’s virginity, in a glut of sensuousness? I paused. The track that the mind had taken seemed to saddle the soul with weariness; how did I get from a casual observation outside of me to an inward examination and self-whipping? For to be honest, ignoring the intellectual masturbation of celebrating a false individual superiority, was I not also them? Could I really claim exception? No, for if I stay true to one of my earlier lines of philosophy, I was a taker, like every one of them, " selfish to the core, lapping up the luxuries and comforts conveniently. Where is the redemption then? Did I ask myself? What if I did? Nothing works better than good old self-deception, right? Truly did one say that there ought to have been a tenth circle of hell, the most freezing, and tortuous with no mercy, no kindness, relentless with no hope, reserved for me, us, all. The messiah is just not dead, he never was! © 2014 DC |
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Added on July 23, 2014 Last Updated on August 5, 2014 Tags: nature, elements of nature, self-examination, soul, critical analysis, us, deception, tenth circle |