a drive down allesandro

Floating in orbit

as these palm trees ,

just went by me

 

Green  leaves,

Diamond coated,

 

I could feel there

Grandeaur reflections

 

El Sol,

The Herald ,

 

Moreno Valley,

bares tree's that are dead from the outside

in

Appendages,

digested in the luxury of

bark

Stretching and moaning for gravity

 

The asphalt is a two headed  snake

liquifying

 down a hill

 

The horizon ,

with arms spread wide open

                                  is

         conscious 

                                      &

                 aware

 

 

Reviews

[Jeddie]

There is strong imagery created and the use of simple vocab is good, it feels pretentious

[Lyrical Love]

Excellent imagery!
And the comparison of the two worlds is metaphorically awesome.
I love your work!

[☮]

Objects we take for granted on a daily basis personified. I do agree. The world is alive, my friend. Every single part of it. This was tight - your writing always is outside of the box.

Nice piece!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

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[Spilled Her Guts in Cur..]

I love the voce of your poems. its so fluid and your use of language is fantastic.

[Ravenskald]

this is very thoughtful
I enjoyed it and it requires a lot more thought than
I have time to do it justice

[Samuel Dickens]

You have a poet's eye, I believe. Observing the sublime and seeing more than others see. Nice work.

[~angelalala~]

this is a great write. i felt like i was in the car with you, driving down this lonely stretch of highway. i love the lines "The horizon ,

with arms spread wide open". it always seems like the horizon is inviting us, opening its arms to us. the imagery is great, i love the idea of diamond-coated palm tree leaves & it makes me yearn for the coast again. simple, but a wonderful & inspiring write.