LIGHT

LIGHT

Rolling through crystals

Reflecting on the past

The present

And maybe…

The future

Depending on how you look at it

As water ripples

There is no resistance

The clouds may cover

However, never destroy

What we all need to survive

It is the determination within us

The food of soil

 From the soil there is growth

We strive to reach the sky

Where there is

Plenty of light

Find  it within yourself

And shine

Reviews

[Livana Lowell]

I like how you introduced light and elaborated it by explaining what light truly is.

I like how you use personification to emphasize on the movement and the feeling of true light.

I think this very beautiful. Maybe it could be stronger, but I still like it.

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"the clouds may cover
However, never destroy
What we all need to survive
It is the determination within us"

inner strength flows from this poem:-)

i love it!!!

james:-)

[Liza]

very empowering
thank you for sharing
your wisdom in this creative expression