MELODIC SEX

The keys of the piano

Stroked so softly

Like butterflies

And sweet melodic rainbows

Joined by Soothing violins

Lioness prowling

Intensifying the melody

Ready to devour

Base dominates

Giving depth

Meaning

Climax

Drums solo

With rhythmic strokes

Knocking

Banging

Acoustic finally

A voice of pleasure

Heavenly harps

Small drops of dew

Calming linger

 

Reviews

[Comatose]

Wow...that's a really inspiring piece. Well done :)

[~Princess~]

Oh wow I never thought it was possible to compare sex to music but WOW you are tremendous job I am very shocked you have got it hun. I love how I could get the feel of this poem. Especially the heavenly harps makes me think of all the moaning lolzs no offense but wow I am really in shock. I love your poem hun. Very well put and described. I love it keep up the good work hun. Have a nice day.

[Senseless whatever]

very nicely done. Great visuals leading the reader, teasing.

[Millionth Muse]

After just writing a "climactic" piece of my own, I really liked this one, as it gave me a different feeling and take on the whole "process" than I used in my write. I like the imagery, and the way that the whole thing felt like music. Nicely done.

[Poetic Beauty]

forgot to type the word first lol

[Poetic Beauty]

It is a great poem. I loved time I read it. I love it even more great job

[Bette]

i love the way you tied this together. its powerfully erotic. kind of like the look but don't touch. excellent job.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love how you tied sex in the music. This poem is very sensual and moving. I love the metaphor. Beautifully done.

[Hippy]

i love music every instrument mentioned is so great and i really enjoy the imagry and the music you put into my head while reading

[The Analog Kid]

Nice use of music and the other imagery. You write in free form very well. Tastfully steamy!

Patrick