CARAMEL, CHOCOLATE, EBONY

This is my first Haiku- dedicated to African American History month

Desired color

Like wearing high fashion skin

Exclusive beauty

Reviews

[Millionth Muse]

Beautiful piece. The thing about this type of poetry is that they need to be both representative of distinct imagery, as well as follow a strict pattern...I think you captured that here. I would say this is probably more of a Senryu than a Haiku--because it follows the structure, but instead of being a piece about nature (which is 99% what Haiku does), it speaks of human things. Either way, really love it! Kudos to you!

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gifted by nature
sepia tones of heaven
from the Mother land

[Comatose]

Ooh, this is a nice one. Well done my friend ^^

[Hippy]

very nice i could never do haikus

[~Princess~]

i agree lolzs love the poem

[Constance-Outspoken]

Lovely Haiku, D. And it's true. I always used to say that if I could look like anyone in the world it would be Tyra Banks. I have always envied dark skin. :)

[alan khan]

direct. and true. nice work.

[Senseless whatever]

Awesome. Nice and to the point.